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Sexual-Lobster, will you marry me?

...

Please?

Or insult me, works too, I'm an attention masochist whore.

OoooOoOoooOoOoooh!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

go to hell you filthy bitch!

Tweening done right

Really liked the visuals, audio, story and how you gave life to (and sync'd) those. I'm no expert but here are some bits I feel you could have done better though:

- During the intro, when it zooms out from the "eye", at first I thought he was a robot with not much going into his head. The fact the thumbnail kinda reminded me of tarboy probably is a reason too.

- Also confused the white shadow (while he's running with his tools) for some kind of cheering character.

- At the end, when the text is scrolling, it felt like more could be going on in the background.

Still, 5/5, keep up the good work!
- Khann

daigonite responds:

Thanks for your honest response!

1. Yeah, several other people had difficulty recognizing him as well! My father called him "a tin man". I think next time I make an animation like this I'll include more details in his shirt/body, and a bit more animation. I kind of wanted it to be simple, but there is such thing as too much!

2. I did this as a reverse-shadow, since the background was black. Even if it #330000 which I used for the second chorus, it still wouldn't be as strong.

3. True, I wanted to keep it simple for reading but as I said it could easily be too simple.

Thanks for the pointers and the honest review! I appreciate it. :)

Very nice creation.

The piranha plant itself is awesome. Its mouth really is scary! And I loved the baby one too. 10/10 without a doubt.

The flash has nice song and photography, nothing outstanding tho and need a replay button too (it got stuck on the loading screen at the end).

5/5 anyway, thank you for making this.

Khann

Kalapusa responds:

Yeah, you got me on the button thing. I'd like to blame my recent rough move from MX (which I was quite comfortable with) on a now defunct computer (which also almost broke my leg) to CS4 for the lack of a proper replay button. After doing my O Pato vid and a few other projects, I temporarily left flash animation and went into sculptures for years until the idea came up to follow through the process of making the plant. I knew I should have learned more Action Script. :/

You can still right click and press play but I really wish I could add one without getting into code.

not bad

I do not like random movies very much usualy, this one wasn't that bad :) Too much shape twining tho.

Sad you don't remember who did this music, I like it.

baomon responds:

I just found out that it's the

Baby Elephant Walk by Henry Mancini.

That was ok.

Good job (graphics, style, sound), the story is nice as well, only thing was the messy end ... You could prolly make it a bit more clear to avoid having to display some explanations.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

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Not bad.

I like the style, humor is ok.

As some others stated you should correct your spelling mistakes ... I guess you are not an english native speacker and translated it before submiting here? Correct them, worth it.

Still very good for a first flash tho.

mannynose responds:

Eye maid rong speling awn pirpose, joo silly :^)

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