That was ok.
Good job (graphics, style, sound), the story is nice as well, only thing was the messy end ... You could prolly make it a bit more clear to avoid having to display some explanations.
That was ok.
Good job (graphics, style, sound), the story is nice as well, only thing was the messy end ... You could prolly make it a bit more clear to avoid having to display some explanations.
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Not bad.
I like the style, humor is ok.
As some others stated you should correct your spelling mistakes ... I guess you are not an english native speacker and translated it before submiting here? Correct them, worth it.
Still very good for a first flash tho.
Eye maid rong speling awn pirpose, joo silly :^)
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